- Detailed research
- Clearly written, focused essay
- Good examples/quotes
- Key concepts are clearly pointed out
- Great use of wider context with specific media terminology
- Good use of critical debates using moral panic
- Good examples of gender representation
EBI:
- Needs more concise and shorter quotes
- Feminist media theorists
- Add more examples to back up points
- More institution background
- Need to cover some economical and political wider context
- Could use other types of critical debates
- More theories e.g. Feminism waves
What I am going to do to improve my Critical Investigation:
- Add Feminist theories e.g. different waves and link them to different eras, emphasising how times have changed and link to current and historic text
- Shorter quotes (embed into sentences)
- Ensure my bibliography is laid out in the correct format e.g. put ibid in italics and hyperlink the web links
- Check spelling, punctuation and grammar
- Add more examples and research to back up points stated
- Cover more economical and political wider context
- Introduce the Critical Investigation better, add more background/institutional information
- Bring in more critical debates
- Keep within the word count (2,200 max excluding quotes)
- Shorten the starting quote
- Add 4 more book references
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